Friday, December 12, 2008

Winter's Stripes

This morning as I drove across the river back into Rhea County, I happened to look up.

The bridge that spanned the river inclined just enough to elevate me over the horizon's landscape. Driving east I saw the mountain line, which guards Dayton, and the valley below--still frozen from the night.  Hanging overhead of the valley and the mountain was a winter sky, a cosmic drawing.

Running southeast to northwest, clouds striped a perfectly blue sky. At near-perfect intervals, the stripes marked the sky like a football field of blue.  The stratocumulus formations seemed pregnant with snow--gray, robust bellies curved around and up, whitening as the clouds grew taller.  They were heavy. The wind emptied the sky in-between--clear allies for the sun to shine through.    

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

Publious, you are such a good writer...

Publius said...

Well thank you, sir. I happen to think you're pretty good at what you do as well.

It's funny; after I wrote this I wasn't really happy with how it turned out . . .

Beth Impson said...

Typical of good writers . . . never satisfied, no matter how good everyone else assures you it is! :)

Publius said...

You know, you've used the words "good" and "writer" consecutively a few times when talking about me before, but each time I'm still taken aback a bit, given who it is that's giving the praise.

Thanks. :)

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